OH my god!

Praise be to the GI's that kicked that dopey oooooooOOooOOOOOO MY GOD BIN LADEN GOT KILLED AGAIN! BWAHAHHAHHAHAHHhAHAHhAHAHAHhA! !

Almost there- But not quite..

There needs to be some exposition here. Who the hell is this kid? Why is he standing there? Is this a disseratation for his class? Is he just being a moron? Maybe the whole point is to say as many "Dirty" words as he can before he becomes repetitive?

hmmm

Ok, I gotta tell ya, this is not my brand of music. The start is not very definitive, and while sometimes this is good, in this case, you have thrust us deep into a groove that at first is very difficult to grab.

It has applications, but as a song, for dance or chilling, i gotta say this ranks fairly low.

For using as a background when someone is entering a warehouse, yes- but with the volume down.

anyway, thats my opine - Keep it up!

Ok, here's the G-Spot...

I gotta tell ya, ya had me with the synth in the beginning but lost me when I didn't hear a banging bass at the onset. Actually, never heard it.

This song has great potential, but without that bass, it is incomplete.

missing an element

Yes, it seems this misses one element, the high pitched handclap, or some serious tinny tick in there. Also, halfway your synth is off beat and honestly should be dropped. I applaud the effort though.