hmmm
Ok, I gotta tell ya, this is not my brand of music. The start is not very definitive, and while sometimes this is good, in this case, you have thrust us deep into a groove that at first is very difficult to grab.
It has applications, but as a song, for dance or chilling, i gotta say this ranks fairly low.
For using as a background when someone is entering a warehouse, yes- but with the volume down.
anyway, thats my opine - Keep it up!
You are right....you have hit what I wanted to pose with this song. I get the feeling of the premeditation of a murder, or someone creeping up into a warehouse or an old building.
missing an element
Yes, it seems this misses one element, the high pitched handclap, or some serious tinny tick in there. Also, halfway your synth is off beat and honestly should be dropped. I applaud the effort though.
yea, i mite update it after a wile when im done with the next 1. i know my syths suck for now but im sure ill get better sooon. either that i should take a month to do something outstanding like ragevi
Wow.
You really need to calm this down. You have way too many things going on, and therefore you get your sound muddled, and the listener (or at least this one) is forced to either choose what to listen to, or to hate the song. Hate is a strong word, but you had a good start.... Just kill some of the superfluous things in your song.
True, true...But I actually made this in a hurry :P :P Thanks for the review man!
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